MIXING FACTS WITH SUBJECTIVE
<br />INFORMATION
<br />~',Aany staff reports share the common prob--
<br />lem of mixing factual information with sub-
<br />jective information. ]'he excerpt below,
<br />taken From the findings section of a staff
<br />report, illustrates this shortcoming typical
<br />of many reports: the report drafter has
<br />intermingled statements of fact with subjec-
<br />tive assessments, analysis, and common-
<br />taw that seems to contain recommended
<br />conditions for approval. Taken on its face,
<br />such language would make it difficult for
<br />both the applicant and the commissioner to
<br />know what action he ar she could or should
<br />take.
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<br /> Fha property is designated SRt sing(e-famd¥
<br /> development in the 2. OLD Plan but there is no
<br /> opportunity for a roaq connection tn either
<br /> INesbittl or [Maple Avenue]. There nave been
<br /> several non-residential development inouiries
<br /> for this site but no application for these has
<br /> even been submitted. The proposed condo-
<br /> minium deve~qpment could be aa acceptable
<br /> use if the proper protections for adiacent prop-
<br /> arty are incorporated and if hi§h-quality devel-
<br /> opment standards are met.
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<br /> In this example, the fact presented is:
<br />"The property is designated SRz sin§lo-family
<br />development in the 2OlD Plan ..."
<br /> The analysis presented is: "no opportu-
<br />pity for a road connection."
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<br /> And the language that could constitute
<br />either analysis or a recommendation,
<br />includes: "condominium development could
<br />be ~n acceptable use," "proper protections for
<br />adiacent property," and "if hi§h-quality devel-
<br />opment standards are met."
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<br /> It would take the reader several passes at
<br />the text to separate these elements. The
<br />upshot is that findings of facts, staff analysis,
<br />and recommendations should each be pre-
<br />sented in separate sections of the report, with
<br />each highlighted by a heading.
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<br />EXCESSIVE DETAIL OR INADEQUATE DETAIL
<br />Planners who prepare staff reports often
<br />unwittin§ly provide excessive information in
<br />an attempt to §ear the report :o all audi-
<br />em:es and to ,:over all bases of potential
<br />inquiries from commissioners, applicants,
<br />and other users. Too much detail makes ,'.he
<br />report, Which the members of the decision-
<br />makin§ body often read :-hortly before the
<br />,)u0lic mae[in§, hard to fathom. Far axam-
<br />i)i~::, ,n JOlne 5toff .'eoor[s Ala~ reviewed. Ne
<br />~olinn ha[ ..)Die.C ,)1 e~lSlefeu 1]ali
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<br />receipts were included, when simply a list-
<br />in§ of the addresses from which receipts
<br />had been returned (or not returned) would
<br />have sufficed.
<br /> In contrast, many reports'bften leave
<br />out vital information that c'outd.have a
<br />bearin§ on a planning commissioner's d(~ci-
<br />sion to approve, deny, or conditionally
<br />approve a development project. This was
<br />the case where either a particular reviewing
<br />agency, such as the engineering depart-
<br />ment, had not provided comments, or a
<br />particular requirement of the application
<br />had yet to be completed (e.g., "Petitioner
<br />must provide a Master Drainage Plan.").
<br />With the former, such omissions make it
<br />difficult for the reader to discern if a
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<br /> Ideally, any standard
<br /> requirements to
<br /> which the developer
<br /> will need to adhere
<br /> should be addressed
<br /> in a preapplication
<br /> conference.
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<br />reviewing agency had indeed ~eviewed the
<br />proposal and determined it to have r{o effect
<br />on'its interests [e.g., school district) or if
<br />they had reviewed it but had yet to provide
<br />comments for inclusion in the staff report.
<br />Thus, inadequate detail leaves questions
<br />hanging that may delay resolution of the
<br />approval or suggest that local government
<br />agencies are failing to complete timely and
<br />thorough reviews.
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<br />UNCLE. AR LANGUAGE
<br />Staff reports sometimes contain unclear lan-
<br />3ua§e that makes it difficult for the applicant or
<br />the reviewing body to decipher exactly what
<br />standard is being applied or what action will be
<br />necessary to address the concerns raised in the
<br />report. The recommendations must provide
<br />dear guidance on wi~at aspects of the proposai
<br />need to be revised, .]nd bV what date, for the
<br />proposal to ne considered for approval. In the
<br />example be'iow, the unclear tan§uage appears
<br />;n italics, iust what exactlv is expected of the
<br />ioDlicanr in ;his .:3se."
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<br />Landscapin§:
<br />No'preliminary landscaping plan has been pro-
<br />vided with the Communib/Conference applica-
<br />tion. It is li~ely that the plant materials chosen
<br />will be those that blend and complement
<br />those used with the ~aple Street t 8uiidin§
<br />(Phase ~).
<br /> Along the south side of the parcel is a Lineal
<br />planting strip comprised of coniferous trees
<br />(pines and cedars) and some deciduous trees
<br />mixed in .... Care should be taken to see what
<br />could be done to preserve this lineal groupin§
<br />of trees.
<br /> A fair amount of existing landscapin§ in
<br />north and south parking- lots will be eliminated
<br />tn order to construct the new office building
<br />and parking structure. Perhaps some of the
<br />landscaping that is currently in place c¢n be
<br />reused or salvaged. [emphasis suppliedl
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<br /> Many staff reports intermingle or in some
<br />cases confuse standard requirements, as con-
<br />tained in the development code, with com-
<br />ments or conditions for approval. Ideally, any
<br />standard requirements to which the developer
<br />will need to adhere should be addressed in a
<br />p~'eapplication conference. Thus, if one of the
<br />conditions of approval in the staff report is the
<br />submission ora specific pian (e.g., a drainage
<br />plan), document, or other needed drawing or
<br />data that technically should have been
<br />included as pad: of the initial application but
<br />was not, then the application is in effect
<br />incomplete and is not ready for review by the
<br />planning commission. One could argue that
<br />'inclusion of language describing such boiler-
<br />plate requirements in the staff report serves
<br />simply as a reminder to the applicant that
<br />additional pape~vork is stiil needed and to
<br />the commission that the requirement has ,not
<br />been overlooked by planning staff. The problem,
<br />however, is that the planning commission is
<br />perhaps being asked to make a decision on an
<br />application with vital information still pending.
<br /> In the 'staff report excerpt below, items ~.,
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<br />fl, and 8 are clearly standard requirements
<br />that should have been addressed by the
<br />applicant prior to the staff report's comple-
<br />tion. One wonders how the application got
<br />this far into public review without the require-
<br />ments having been satisfied. Item 7 might be
<br />an initial submission requirement, or it might
<br />be Ieft to ~.he developer's [ater discretion.
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<br /> Comments on a PUD application by Public
<br /> 'Norks Department
<br /> t. A ;ire ,Jrainag'e plan is required.
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<br /> z. A: ft. no-access easement witl be required
<br /> ainu8r iLove!¥ Lakes Road! and [P/anatown
<br /> ,.ekes Parkwavi 5inca ail direct access
<br /> nontd :nme ¢rom the new ouqlic cui-de-
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